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Owttac: Past Revealed Part Uno

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*speakers* Back to the Gishnog, it's time for your snacks.

"...Why is it called a 'gishnog'?" Jixrah, Owttac's best friend, wondered outloud.
"I have no idea," Owttac answered, "Beats the last name for that place."
"Yeah... Gishnohgfurgeymoiseadumep WAS a little over the top..." Jixrah said.
"Oh gee, ya think?"

Back in the Gishnog, the smeets sat down and waited for Shlorrn, the Irken in charge of the snack supply at the camp, to come out and give them their snacks. Owttac and Jixrah were the first ones in. Then came the other smeets: Carzoy, Zelri, Arzinixro, and Zexsa.

"OH MY TALLEST, OUR TRAINING SUUUUUUCKS," complained Zexsa. Zexsa was a whiner, no matter what. If she was given an unlimited supply of snacks on a silver platter, she would complain about how they're too salty, where she'd put them all, and other stupid stuff like that. Personally, Owttac didn't like her one bit. And Owttac was sure the other smeets didn't, either.

"Quit your whinin'," Carzoy barked, "Or you won't get your snack." Carzoy was always a brave smeet, and very blunt. If he saw tallest Miyuki and thought her uniform was a disgusting piece of dookie, he'd say it.

"Please don't yell..." Zelri said in her quiet voice. Zelri was a easy-to-scare smeet, humble, and extremely shy. Owttac and Jixrah always tried to help her out during the training, even if it meant that they had to take the blame for something she did. Zelri HATED arguing, and she would run away to a quiet place, all while crying her eyes out, on the camp if someone started to argue or yell.

Arzinixro came in and sat down on the floor in front of the cooling unit. Arz was the shortest of the smeets, and was extremely negative all the time. He hated light and warmth, and would always take the harder but darker tracks to navigate during training. He disliked Owttac, mostly because of her height. She got the best snacks, the best trainers, and the most attention from everyone. He hated her, actually.

The door opened at the end of the Gishnog, and a cloaked figure emerged from the kitchen. The smeets assumed this figure to be Shlorrn, since he was handing out the snacks.

"Thanks, Shrlorrn," Owttac said, taking her custom snack from the pile. Being the tallest of the elite smeets gets you benefits.

Shlorrn didn't reply, and continued down the line of smeets.

Jixrah thanked the figure for his snack, too, but the presumed Shlorrn didn't respond.

'Something's not right, here...' Owttac thought to herself, 'Shlorrn is a kind Irken, and he usually says 'You're welcome!' with such enthusiasm... Weird...'

As Zelri took the last snack, the figure closed the door at the end of the Gishnog and removes his cloak.

The smeets all gasped in surprise, for the figure was not Shlorrn, but something entirely different. The creature had something like leather on its 'arms' and 'legs', and scales down its chest and midsection. The thing had dark green eyes with horizontal double line pupils. None of the smeets knew what to make of this, so they all sat there, wondering where Shlorrn was, who or WHAT this thing was, and what would happen to them.

"Y-you're not Shlorrn!" Carzoy said, pointing.

"Way to state the obvious, kid." the alien said, revealing long sharp teeth and two blue tongues when he talked. "I'm not your friend, you Irken skum," the alien continued, in a hushed tone. "I'm a Dormazrian elite,and you are all under arrest."

"For WHAT?!" Carzoy blurted out, "We're just smeets, and we didn't break any laws!"

"Yes, smeets..." The alien replied, "IRKEN young..."

"...let me get this strait..." Owttac said, being REALLY confused, "You're arresting us because... we're smeets...... That makes no sense whatsoever."

"I'm arresting you because you're Irken," the Dormazrian said, "Elite Irken at that."

The smeets were confused at this reason. They didn't know why it was so bad to be Irken, and they all enjoyed it. Then Zexsa had to but in.

"You can't arrest us!" said the ignorant smeet, "You don't have the right! You're... you're... inferior!"

"Shut UP Zexsa," Owttac said under her breath.

"You should listen to your friend," The alien said, sounding angered.

"Oh yeah? What happens if we don't go with y-"

"ZEXSA!" The smeets all shouted. The alien had killed her! Shot her through the head with a laser! Wait... where'd that laser come from...?

"You'll all end up like her if you don't come with me." The alien stated, the laser disappearing into his arm.

"Ewwww....." Jixrah said, seeing the weapon be engulfed by the fleshy tissue of the alien.

"Mind telling us your name?" Owttac asked.

The alien hesitated and finally said 'his' name was Shkooptoplix.

"Cool..." Owttac said, looking to the ground.

"Come, I'm on a schedule," Shkooptoplix said, motioning to the kitchen door.

We all went in and through the kitchen, and out the back.

"...What about Zexsa's body?" Carzoy asked, running up beside Shkooptoplix.

The creature ignored him. They came up to a snack supply ship, and Shkoop (as Owttac nicknamed him), pressed a button on a remote that also came out of nowhere, and a hologram stopped projecting the snack supply ship image, revealing a sleek, black ship.

Shkooptoplix turned to the smeets and stated: "Get in."
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BTW: A "gishnog" is like a cafeteria or mess hall.

:iconyayzplz: I FINALLY got this on here! I wrote it out, but I mostly winged it when I typed it. :iconhurrplz: I do that when I wright: Make a short draft, and add on a million kagillion things to it. :iconicameplz:

I think this is the best thing I've ever written in my whole life. Ever. :iconimhappyplz:

Owttac and all other pplz except Miyuki belong to ME!!! :evillaugh:
Miyuki and Irk (c) :iconjhonenplz:
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